you're like glitter
you sparkle and shine
by the gleam in your eyes
I could move in your creves
and taste you like heaven
the depts of your soul
as I lose control
our passion is ours
and I take you by heart
to die in your glaze
as to whisp you away
to pray to all god that in my arms you'll stay
Author notes
this poem was quickly revised please comment honestly
A contest entry
- 12 lines or less by J.J. Sass.
525 points, ended December 2, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Although this is a rather sensually expressed moment, I asked for no rhyming pieces.
Thanks for the entry.
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Lost me!
I read it and read it over again... and I was compelled untill the last phrase... I am not usually one to give an empty review... So I offer you this, I loved it till the end...! Sorry!
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