The smile you show
Is so contagious
The lies you say
Are just outrageous
It seems like I'm happy
Just when you're around
Lavish the moment
Don't make a sound
It's so hard to love
Someone like you
To make you care
What can I do?
You give me hope
That doesn't last
You pick me up
Then make me crash
I'm tired of crying
And tired of tears
But you're all I've got
You're all my fears
Author notes
Crushes are only called crushes because someone's meant to get hurt..
ThatONEweirdChick
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truth expressed with powerful words makes everybody feel the pain and helplessness....nice poem
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Wow, you are good! Love this one, its simple but yet packs just enough punch. Also, I know that the last/crash line isnt a perfect rhyme, but I dont think iit needs to be. Its a great stanza and I certainly would not change it. Claps!
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lol at your A.N. it's so true though!! i know a living example! -points at emo little spainard girl- yup that little girl needs to learn to stand up for her feelings and take back what is hers!!!!!
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Would be perfect but for the last/crash half rhyme. So only two claps, looking at the rest of your work you are too good to let that through!
Excellent
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The poem goes really well with your note. Its a great write.
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