i love you,
for crying out loud,
i love you.
i give you signs,
i touch you,
i have even told you.
why dont you blood well see?
i love you,
fucking understand me!
i may appear heartless,
it's only a facade,
i am too wounded to let my out.
what i feel stays hidden,
behind a wall of hate,
morbid fascination.
people envy me,
why?
i bet if they knew me,
like you do,
they would hate me too.
i hurt,
i need to be healed,
i need to feel alive.
i have chosen you,
no,
my heart has chosen you,
what about your heart?
A contest entry
- Heartbroken by Love-Lee.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any advice?
Comments
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Wow
This was a great piece... I loved it... The last two stanzas stood out so much thanks for the entry it was a great write!
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