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I Love you

Is there any right way to say this,
These three words that I feel
For I sit and cry,
At the time tht's gone by
This feeling I know is real

If I tell you will you stay?
Smile, and hold me near?
Or will you push me and run,
Shield yourself with a gun
And leave out of genuine fear

And if you don't feel the same way
I swear I won't change my mind
They mock you and I
And I can do nothing but sigh
I can be wonderful you'll soon come to find




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  • HerbalGoat
    May 22, 2008

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    I see that you entered this in a contest with the title of Truth. Beauty. Freedon. Love. And this is exactly what this poem it. It is full of all the emotions of a love that is newly beginning. Great poem.


  • LeilaJayne
    May 8, 2008
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    Thank god for you thats all i have to say! I was just about to give up hope and delete this contest, as all entries so far have been too long, too short, or absolutely nothing to do with the contest, but then i came to read this, and it gave me a will to carry on the contest [and a will to keep on livin! LOL] good work, i like it!! xxx


  • SincerelyMegan
    March 3, 2008

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    "If I tell you will you stay?
    Smile, and hold me near?"

    I know what you mean in this
    stanza. It's always
    hard to read a guy-
    but actually knowing what they will
    do- impossible!

    Good luck.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 30, 2007
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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    Oh I remember having these feelings, scary but wonderful. The not knowing if your feelings are reciprocated is hard too. Well written. AP is pleased to have you here and we all hope that you enjoy the site. If you have any questions, the Greeter team is here to assist you.

    JeannieD


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    awwww. cute. i guess i cant always keep blaming you for ditching me for brian. i guess it was meant to be.

  • ms. kitty kat
    November 19, 2007

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    this is a beautiful poem. great job.. you have a great writing talent. keep it up..

    Is there any right way to say this,
    These three words that I feel
    For I sit and cry,
    At the time tht's gone by
    This feeling I know is real

    kathy


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