Let me feel your motor hum, the vibrations as they purr
and I'll ride you all night long with the feelings that you stir.
Let the wind whip through my hair as I see your breath upon the air;
I'm such a sucker for you baby, this one on one love affair.
Caress me in all the right places, take me for a ride;
don't ever stop, you're revving hot deep inside.
Don't ever worry baby, I'll surely treat you right;
my lover made of steel will love me through the night.
Author notes
Gotta love the double meanings!
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In a list
A contest entry
- Bike and Babe by Riftkin.
300 points, ended November 29, 2007, 1 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is wonderful.
and because I love it
will give you the gold as well as the points
to bad no one else wanted to play.
But my dear you are great.
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I can't believe no one else got in on this contest.
But I have a few like that too.
Thanks hun, glad you liked it. And thank you for the trophy, I figured this contest would get pulled.
Storm -
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What me pull a contest with a poem like that... come on now dear you know me better than that..
Joann
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well done, this should be a winner, where do you line up for the ride, lol, great job, blessings john
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Thanks for the comments hun. Line forms that way ----->
Storm -
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lol, couldn't find the line, still was a great poem, John
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Ooh! I wanna be THAT bike! I got a ride for ya sweetheart!
Nice work babe, I've missed your writing.
Love ya-
Jay -
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I bet you do! Thanks for the comments darlin' Miss you being around. When you coming back here?
Love ya too
Storm
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You are such a naughty girl, but you do it so well.
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Hehe, I am an
I am always good, don't you see my halo?
Just ignore those horns sticking out around it, lol.
Thanks for the comments.
Storm
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Whew!
Sizzling and sultry this is, my friend!
Hot and steamy...well done!
Wishing you the very best in this contest!!! -
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Thank you sandy, appreciate it.
Storm
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