Wearing a blindfold, tied in the wood
Standing still where you said I should
How can it be that I fear you so much
When all of my body aches for your touch
Last time I saw you. My senses were lost
I'll love you forever but what is the cost
Darkness and passion you rule all my life
You promised to make me your slave and your wife
A virgin before you made free with each hole
Now you are my owner both body and soul
Nothing I've ever seen, heard or felt
Matches the way that you work with your belt
My body is yearning to serve you again
I want all the pleasure I need all the pain
Please be my owner, please don't be late
I'm tied, and I'm blindfolded, waiting my fate.
A contest entry
- Erotica (Picture Prompt) by Beating.
450 points, ended December 1, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment below. Spelling or rhyming or scanning corrections welcome.
Comments
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Wey Hey, this is not cricket old boy. I would rather play this game though. Well done.
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EXCELLENT! Another fantastic poem that is quite the joy to read! Into my favorites ASAP!!!!
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wowowwowow
UMM thanks Jeff. like i really needed this this morning
great job. thanks for sharing this with me.
always
Tory
ps stop writing about me !!LMAO j/k
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Wow! I'm blown away, this is just so good! The rhynming and rythm makes it really easy to read, and you truly had me turned on with your words. I wanted to be that person, waiting for her fate! Love it!
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great write
divinely sensual
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Your rhyme is divine
your words are fine
for you are a winner here
so I offer you my cheer
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Having seen the picture you have put words to the image that seem frighteningly beautiful.
Your mixture of fear and love are wonderful and this deserves the gold.
Very sensual....all the best in the contest.
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Wow... okay seriously... no offense to the Snow White Queen but if this doesn't win some kind of award there is something off! This was so incredible. I LOVED IT. Everything from the sensuality to the rhyming and word choice... amazing! Your poetry is always such a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest.
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