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I Want You To....

B e here with me
R emember why I left
E mbrace the thought of me
A lways think of me
T ell me you love me
H ear my love through the phone
E tch my love into your heart

F orgive me for leaving you alone
O r leaving you empty
R emember that I'm here for you

M iss me as I miss you
E nter my heart and not leave it

B e okay until I come home
A lways keep your head up
B elieve that I will be back
Y ell at anyone who tells you different


I love you and I will be home soon

Author notes

for my special someone, this poem is about the girl that i have been together with for over a year and i miss her so much that i wrote this poem for her... so i dont know what type of love this is but it is mine and hers

Denika

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  • sidewinder silver member
    December 7, 2007

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    romance found within that breath of time where memories are found and made!
    I did enjoy this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at aa time!
    Bill


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Wonderfully written. It oozes longing and love for your partner. It is beautiful to see such things.


  • Sensual Sapphire
    November 19, 2007

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    You show such love and longing here in these words. I hope she knows how much you love her and that she loves you in turn. Here's hoping that you'll be together soon.


    • denika
      November 20, 2007
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      thank you we will be soon.. thank you for reading my poem


  • PureRomance
    November 19, 2007

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    This is a very beautiful poem. You did an excellent job with this poem. Could you please be so kind as to add to your authors note who you are and what kind of love this poem is about. God bless you in all that you do and write, and I look forward to reading more from you hopefully before this contest is over if I can get a clue as to who you are. Thank you for entering and good luck to you and your poem in this contest.

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