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Did I make it that easy....

"I never want to see you unhappy..."

Another legacy of sorrow cast through ironclad silence -
bittersweet symphony of our lost love.
Bonds severed by shaking hands of sisters Fate -
a fine line crossed, stitched carelessly together.

Your face plays star as the demon of my nightmare -
your voice - the minions working under demonic command,
dancing like incubus' of injustice
answering Beelzebub's forsaken demand.

[I thought you'd want the same from me...]

Sing to me princess, those sweet lullabies of remorse -
waltz across my heart to the undending serenade.
Paint me princess, those radiant hues of angst -
use my soul as your canvas of regret.

Lace my words in the darkest burbon and burn away all love -
stomp me down like a doormat of your mistakes.
Write me a novel, darling, of every candy coated lie
and read it to me like a tragedy of what used to be.

[I cannot wake up in the morning without you on my mind...]

Let's play another game, only let me roll first
and as the pieces sweep over the graveyard of my heart,
let's rejoice in the justification of destruction that reigns -
the armaggedon of my essence.

Draw me an escape, baby, away from your loveless lines -
watch as dying roses shed crimson on what's left of my life -
Don't worry, you know I'll always take you back.
So take that ice pick and stab my frozen heart one more time.

[Now you're gone and I'm haunted but I bet you are just fine...]

Don't look back because we both know you don't care -
take every shred of happiness you gave along with you.
Cut me - erase me, precious - make me transparent in your eyes.
Under estimate me honey, and smile knowing I'm sobbing because of you.

Belittle me to begging for you to return, honey - go ahead.
Sculpt what's left of this mannequin corpse into your perfect imperfection
then demolish me like an abandoned house, ready to be flattened.
Don't sweat princess, the drugs and alcohol make the pain bearable.

[Did I make it that easy to walk right in and out of my life...]

Author notes

Kind of my way of releasing certain things. The brackets and the opening quote are from Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy.

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  • Invader-Zim
    November 23, 2007

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    wow this is really good. As is every poem you write. I love the way you write things, its all smooth and what not. I really like it.

  • Shadow Darkstar
    November 23, 2007

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    [Le Gasp.]

    OMG! Teach Meeeeeeee how to write this beautifully! Please? I wanna know how you damn people do it! I'm jealous damnit!


  • Transcend All
    November 19, 2007

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    Transcend All

    There wasn't a point where I could stop reading. The flow - so smooth, as if I were sitting in your presence watching your lips move, hearing the sound of your heart breaking. yet you stood controlled. The attitude became your wall, the painful reminder of them walking away so easily, although you remained secretly penetrable. It's real, raw - very raw! The colors you used were perfectly balance with how you wrote this piece. The blackness of pain [memories] the hurt and the cool exterior of the blue stood strong with you just as you appeared through out!

    Groovy Write!

    Namaste'