2 a.m. has come and gone,
Leaving me alone
on the swaying deck.
The moon reflects
Off the glistening sea
As my love
Reflects
Off your very being.
Oil glides
Over the surface of water,
Angels fall
Off the head of pins.
My love
Hangs in mid-air
Failing to penetrate
Your targeted heart.
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From RLM
A contest entry
- His words are like poison but his lies make you smile by edit my world..
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 26 entries
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Angels fall
Off the head of pins.
My love
Hangs in mid-air
Failing to penetrate
Your targeted heart.
i really like those lines. you are showing a different side of you in some of your writings here and i am really enjoying reading them. sorry i wasn't on earlier when you messaged but not feeling the greatest at the moment. will try to get with you later on in the week.
good luck in the contest and you do know don't you that you don't have to enter every one you see
i think i have released a writing demon on here.
~shimmer~
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Shimmer
....and you do know don't you that you don't have to enter every one you see
YOU DON'T????????????????????
I'd love to hear about "the different side". And thanks for nice words about my words.
Kiss
Feel better.
RLM
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