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Steal My Pain

My hearts permanently breaking,
No one will ever mend this mess.
There is nothing except darkness,
Let within, telling me to quit.

There's no point in fighting,
I'll never find someone for me.
Am I even worthy of being loved?
Or am I just an unwanted disgrace?

My heart longs for someone to hold,
Someone to hold me and snuggle.
Someone to keep me standing,
Telling me it will all be okay.

I'm left here alone in pain,
Trying to fix the broken pieces.
Wondering what I did to deserve this?
Will I ever find that someone special?

I need him more than ever now,
I need to feel some real love.
Strong arms around me, protecting me,
A loving voice stealing my pain.

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Another poem about the breakup...*SIGHS*

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  • CrazyWhiteGirl527
    December 22, 2007
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    this is a beautifully written poem. Keep lookin and you'll find someone whose right for you

  • forgetmenow
    November 19, 2007

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    holy crap! your truly an amazing writter. the feelings you have must hurt a lot as I can tell by what you wrote. The first four lines are very captavating. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how i can put some of my feelings along with what you write about. Reading work that has a meaning to the writter and reader is awsome. KEEP up your tallent.