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No One Here...

The sundown's now nothing,
More than a permanent reminder.
Left here alone fading,
My heart becomming colder.

There's no one here to hold,
There's no comfort to be found.
Felling so unworthy of love,
Knowing Ill never find my dove.

Your face is just a memory,
Your broken promises still echoing.
The years we spent are sketchy,
One step at a time, I'll keep living.

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Just a poem that i wrote about my feelings about the breakup and stuff...nothing important...

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  • forgetmenow
    November 20, 2007

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    well expressed! i just broke up with my boyfriend last night. you beat me too it. i could have wrote something like this... I havent up dated this is so long i just am commenting , time to get out my poetry book and type some out.