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espousal

Whisps of golden glow break the light
in mirrors of smile.
basking her in his touch.

And they dance,

through imbued breeze,
as his open hands extend forever.

Adorned eyes;
  kissing hypnotic blue
give her wings.
 
Whispering-
  this ring will always
entwine our hearts...

And they fall.

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  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    November 19, 2007

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    Overall, this is a good piece but I find the ending to be quite abrupt. Thanks for entering and good luck in the judging. La x