Walking in the meadows
one clear day
When i saw my friend's backyard,
a thought came to mind
"how unkept your flowers, how unruly,
disgusting your weeds, gives sand to my clear eyes"
I went strolling the other day,
passed through my sister's garden
when a thought rooted
"how unkept your flowers, how unruly,
disgusting your weeds, gives sand to my clear eyes"
Passed my neighbour's house one afternoon
had a look at her front yard
i thought
"how unkept your flowres, how unruly'
disgusting your weeds, gives sand to my clear eyes"
My friend came by one morning
had tea on my backyard
she said
"how unkept your flowers, how unruly,
disgusting your weeds, gives sand to my clear eyes"
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Comments
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A very nice write does teach a good lesson " Clean your own yard first."
Thanks for the entry
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