I dreamt of you
When you had gone,
When you had turned away
I thought of you
How you were wrong
How time had stopped that day
My mind
Could not stop thinking
About your forgotten smile
I couldn't find,
Your memory sinking,
Disappearing all the while
You blessed my dreams
Depressed me so
In muted screams
You would go
Vanished in the darkness
Faded into sadness
You didn't know
How lonely I felt
When you would go
My soul would melt
Stay with me!
Don't leave
I want you to see!
Want you to believe
I miss you,
Goodbye
I'm hurting
Till I die
A contest entry
- I want... by TeenageTears.
450 points, ended December 3, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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WOW! I cant think of anything to explain the impact of this poem!
Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!
I completely loved it!!!
wooooop go u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
my fave part was defianatly
'you blessed my dream, depressing me so'
amazing keep it up
thanks for entering and good luck
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"In muted screams ..You would go" I like how this one flows when you read it, very nice poem. Good work
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