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Be Okay

I know things are
Falling apart
For me now.
But I also know
That You are there
Through thick
And thin.
And I will make it.
I will come through.
I will be okay.

I know this is kind of abstract but I wrote it when I was kind of steaming, so...

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  • uziphiel
    November 30, 2007
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    pretty new to the community welcome? this is a great place to find your awareness you'be okay


  • lesbian-in-love
    November 19, 2007

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    Very beautiful. I love having someone I can count on. You nicely wrapped up what I would tell that person if I could. Thanks so much for the read.


  • ElectricStarrySkies
    November 19, 2007
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    This is really nice. Simple and to the point and really effective and kinda emotive too!!!


  • Samyuktha P.C.
    November 19, 2007

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    Read Chinua Achebe's "Things Fall Apart". A brilliant book. I like the strong ray of hope you keep in your heart. A nice little poem that will start and end any day on a nice note. Love, Sam.