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T(w)oo Seas Apart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When a leaf falls off a tree,

Hope or despair may live.

A hand might catch it fall,

Or earth may caress it hard.

 

The human being lives in folly,

Of smiles and bonds, and

lovely days. Like the hand that

supports my shoulder tonight.

 

Though two seas may separate,

A land afar from my country home,

He who lives there is nearby,

A hand on my shoulder, a love.

 

So, when a year he has gained,

I pat his shoulder too. Just

To remind him once again that

I love him too.

 

 

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Happy Birthday Ron.

Not for the Contest. Just for you.

Lots of love,

Black Comedy (Sam)

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  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    a good smiling piece of poetry to honour another on their celebration day, what more could another poet ask for than a poem given from the heart.

  • ShaCarl
    December 14, 2007
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    You really have talent, your work is awesome!!


  • Lyndon gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    For the contest or not

    Dear Granddaughter, I accept this with grace (I hope) and bless you for your genuine sincerity. Yes, I 'feel' your hand on my shoulder.
    You love me ~ I know this to be so! Ron.


  • denika
    November 19, 2007

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    i like the way that you think and not to mention the way that you write.. i think that whoever this poem is to understands what you feel for them..

    Denika


    • Samyuktha P.C.
      November 20, 2007
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      Wow! That's one of the best compliments I recieved all day. Thanks a lot.. Love, Sam.


  • Anna Emkah
    November 19, 2007
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    This is so sweet... the way you express your love for Ron. All I can say, very well done. Two seas apart, but there is no distance between you and him. So true. He will be there for you (and for any other Winkling for that matter) when you need him. Thanks for your entry. Anna.


  • jazz-cat
    November 19, 2007
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    i like your usage of words in the beginning stanza. great job!

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