To all the boys
And every girl
Waiting for toys
Around the world
Be sure to stay
As sweet as candy
The goodness today
Will come in handy
The good report cards
And chores you've done
Won't seem so hard
When Santa has come
The time is almost here
Make sure that you're not missed
Cause it's that time of year
Santa double checks the nice list
Author notes
Christmas Cheer 2
A contest entry
- ♥~♥~♥~ Christmas Cheer - #2 {Children's Poetry} ~♥~♥~♥ by Elsje.
495 points, ended December 27, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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liked the flow and the feeling...congrats on the trophy...
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I love this such a cute poem. I love Christmas time
Congrats on the Gold well deserved. I love the border background to
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Promise...sing
For trophy toy
with golden sheen
all could enjoy
we write between
the lines with hand
on pen to trace
response both grand
and oozing grace
so good report
for chore well done
may heart and thought
find goblet won.
It's almost time
like late last year
to end my rhyme
and disappear
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haha this is pretty good. i like the flow and beat it has. nicely done and congrats on winning the trophy
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As children’s Christmas poems go
and what I would recite to my daughters this is right in the ballpark
enjoyed the read here
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Very sweet Christmas poem this is!
I love it!
Congratulations on the gold; much deserved!
Be blessed! -
really nice Christmas poem that makes me smile and that would work commecially all over the world. :-).
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very seasonal
This is the perfect poem for all the girls and boys around the world. Nice Poem.
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A very good write and message. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Nice rhythm. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Well done. Congratulations on winning Gold. Well deserved.
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Awesome poem with a nice background. I always love the x mas and its aspect.the last stanza is specially joyous for ppl of all age. a very great work done.
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This is a wonderful holiday poem. I thought I'd read every one in her contest but I guess I missed a few. The background is great and this piece is just perfect to read to a child. I'm bookmarking this little gem and I'm glad I stumbled across your contest which led me to this. Thanks!!!
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A cute piece...
A cute piece; it's funny on how the world is focused on the naughty things that adults do, while trying to get their kids to be nice; nice job. --Joe
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Guilty
This is cool, this should be on a card or something.
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Very nice background for this. I like the simplicity of this and the rhyming. It was well done.
Good luck in your contest.
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*smiling*
VERY cute and appropriate for the season! Sweety write!
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its really good, i can tell you put a lot of thougth in to it, im not very good at the rhyming lark, so well done
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Great Poem
This fuckin nut believes in God - lol - but don't believe in Satan Clause for sure - He is a usurper of the true meaning of Christmas - your poem rhymes well and dances right along - Santa Sucks - hey theres a good title for a poem - lol - Bless God - Joe
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This is pretty and I love the graphics!
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AW! This IS cute! Too bad threat of NO gifts from Santa doesn't hold up throughout the year. It runs out of gas by the time they go back to school after th holidays! I like it! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you!!!
Love the poem, reminds me of what my mom use to say before Christmas each year! we are 4 children and I got 3 step brothers he he poor women tried to get some peace and quiet I suppose! P.S. Love the back ground, goodluck with the contest ;-) your definitely on my finalists list!
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cute
very nice write on the prompt . . love the background . . also like "The goodness today Will come in handy" and "Santa double check the nice list" . . well done and good luck in the contest !!
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Eh.... shouldn't you let the person you are collaborating with that you are... collaborating with them... before you claim to have a Collaboration poem with them... ?
Did you want me to add something to this? -
LOL this is funny..I never considered santa
a creepy old man, but I love your take
on this...Great ending too
~Pastel
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