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Career

We have taken the idea of round
Remodelled and called it a wheel

Which then has been placed on the ground
On tracks they are carved out of steel

And right on its way it does go
In a direction that’s blinded by zeal

Quickly is all that it knows
This career that spins out of the wheel

Author notes

I had a look at the definition of 'career' and its Latin root. Also, its meaning as a verb.

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  • georgie
    November 20, 2007
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    a very interesting concept... cant say i have read anything like it before but i liked it and it has wonderful flow. i wonder why you chose career as a topic tho. actually the more i read it the more i like it. keep it up
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx

  • georgie
    November 20, 2007

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    a very interesting concept... cant say i have read anything like it before but i liked it and it has wonderful flow. i wonder why you chose career as a topic tho. actually the more i read it the more i like it. keep it up
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx

  • Hashnah Sheviatte
    November 19, 2007

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    "Quickly is all that it knows
    This career that spins out of the wheel." I was in a mimic of thingking what to choose, you know what I love my career, the things that I want to do, my passion and maybe it will be a hard thing for a person to keep from the insanity I had put in my self. Nice work!!!

  • tlsledge
    November 19, 2007
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    Well written write.
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