whispers pour forth
cascading a burble within the mind
igniting reasoning’s thought
stabbing at intelligence
attempts are made
at deciphering reality from idealism
within a world of pleasures
mixed with the weird and wonderful
invaders of space
blot out mind’s reality
controlling each atom of thought
leaving the murmurs to hum and buzz
he shares his padded cell with alien friends…
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Prompt by penman.
525 points, ended November 19, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulation on the trophy,
You deseved it Frans.
This is a great metaphorically piece, liked how you ended it and as always
Very well written.
Slán Dolores xx
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Thank you, and I appreciate you reading this. Frans
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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