Always remember that the sun still shines
when the rain falls down, to give us a
glimpse of what's to come, for after the
storm has gone, God's promise will display
in the most beautifull colours all over the
sky, bringing new hope, of a better day.
Always be, a happy little sun-ray, for you
might just brighten, someone else's rainy
day and try not to worry what others will
say,laugh and play, each and every day, you
will surely find,life more sunny that way
Remember that we love you with all of our
hearts, even now when we are worlds apart
In stormy times I will always be there and
daddy's in heaven to take, extra special care...
So, rest peacefull little one,
for this is our promise to you
written with all of my love,
forever...ingraved in stone.
Author notes
written for a very special little girl, obviously
Anekke Bellingan ;-)
A contest entry
- Make My Baby Smile :)) by Rebekah-Ann.
1000 points, ended December 18, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for my poem!!!
THANKS FOR MY POEM
I love you!
Anny
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Dankie vir die pragtige gedig!!! het dit weer vir Aneka gelees vir slaaptyd.
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So much life, so much hope! What an awesome prayer. It brings with it a sense of comfort, and truly did make ME smile. Good luck in the contest!
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Wow!
I have a suggestion! I hope that you don't mind! I have a one word that I would add to it! So here goes!!!!!
" He "!
" ( God's promise, ( " He " ) will display
in the most beautiful colors all over the sky, bringing new hope, of a better day. "
~ James ~
P. S.
I found it to be true to form and well written! This is why I give this one suggestion!
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Oh my this is beautiful thank you So wonderful x x
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This is a beatiful poem.
A prayer for the lonely or lost or just very unhappy.
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Thank you so very much for this beautiful piece!!! I really enjoyed this!!
You are in the finals and the one I chose for the mural will be the gold trophy winner!
Thank you ever so much!!!
Love
Becks
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