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frog (haiku)


Warm lips kiss odd frog
Hoping to find prince charming
All I get is warts

Patricia Gibson-Little

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I keep working on being funny... did this work?
Written October 22nd, 2003

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  • Nelak
    November 22, 2003
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    Well written!!!!

    AngelSeeker,

    This was a humorous poem!!!
    I really enjoyed the read!
    I could just mentally picture it in my head and one word to describe it is ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww. LOL

    Thank you for sharing this! It was very refreshing to read!!!!

    GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!!!!!!

    Keep on writing from the heart and soul!

    Sincerely,



    Nelak

    BRAVO, ANGELSEEKER!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Ava Noire silver member
    November 18, 2003
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    LOL! Very cute, funny haiku. Just what I needed to uplift my spirits.

    I have always liked frogs so the title was a sure sign i'd probably enjoy this. So I'm glad I read


  • Julzzz
    November 18, 2003
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    lol

    i found this quite humorous, especially the ending line, : all i got was warts. lol wonderfully written haiku. i just attempted a humorous haiku myself. anyways, i thank you for writing and posting this funny haiku. ~Julzzz~


  • smileywinks
    October 27, 2003
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    LMAO this is cute, LOL my son knows that holding toads isn't something to do! He ended up with them dang worts too LOL gl on the contest hun, cute write! hagd! smileywinks


  • Madison Attitude
    October 24, 2003
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    oops! lol great job! good luck!
    hugs from Oklahoma!


  • Marcellus
    October 22, 2003
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    hahahahahahaha
    I love it! This is an awesome haiku! Good luck.
    Marcellus

  • sharon edvy
    October 22, 2003
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    yes, it's funny warm and bitter-sweet. a reality punch in a fairytale dream. where have all our fairytales gone?

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