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[ I hate you, ]

I hate you,
I can't even describe how I hate you,
I wish I could watch you die.
Watch pain become your existence.

I loath you,
I wish I could tear my nails into your face,
I can't describe the joy that would be,
watch the blood cover your face.

I abhor you,
I can't describe the feelings wrestling inside me,
I wish I could cut into your flesh, little by little,
Hearing your screams of agony.

I detest you,
I wish I could burn the flesh from your bones, slowly, inch by inch,
I can't describe the relief I'f feel,
Hearing your howls of misery.

I wish you would die.

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  • TatteredAngel
    November 19, 2007
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    Hah.

    I only wrote it to see if I could, usually I stink at poetry, my love poems are even worse.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 18, 2007
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    Whoa,

    I'm sure you have your reasons for this piece.
    I sure hope you find a place of peace and not misery!
    Thanks for sharing, and I hope you fill better soon.

    Peace, Timothy