Who done gone and clipped your wings,
Angel angel sad and lonely?
Who done gone and clipped you now,
and left you sad and homely?
A contest entry
- bring what chaotic poem you posses by choaticrose.
584 points, ended December 11, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I know this sounds like a jingle but hey, it's what came to mind as I thought before getting ready to go out this morning. You can be honest and I will accept criticism.
Comments
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this makes me think in different directions , i like to read about angels and the lord but this makes me think , i am wondering what was on your mind at the time , maybe the angel has lost there wings and has lost grace from god and now they are sad and feel lonely i can imagine the feeling if thhat happened , thanks for sharing this i enjoyed it
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Very Unique
I like it...my one complaint would be its short, I would love to read much more of this
It is a great write! Goos luck!
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Nice,
You know oddly enough.. It's these kind of poetic pieces that stick in reader's heads. Thanks for sharing.. Very creative. Peace, Timothy
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