She walks the halls with her perfectly highlighted hair.
Waving her french manicured nails.
She's either a bitch or a slut.
Everyone hates her, but secretly wants to be her.
perfect body, perfect guy, perfect life.
[but not really]
no one sees the side she tries so hard to hide.
the girl sticking her finger down her throat; yeah, that's her.
the girl who slices her wrists for some sort of control.
Yeah, that's that girl, you know, [the perfect one]
Author notes
option 6 [perfect girl]
I don't know, if it sucks, just dq it.
A contest entry
- [& Enchanted Are We Dancing Like Voo Doo Doll Silhouettes Between The Trees] by LucyLightning.
1600 points, ended December 11, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i like this!
perfect ending!
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thanks so much : ] glad you liked it
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wow this is amazing!!!
jealous!!!
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Wow, I really love this write. It's short yet so powerful and gets the emotion in it across well. Good write!
<3
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thanks : ] glad you liked it.
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Wow,
For a short piece, it was a very indepth topic you have penned upon.. and I thought this was, and is, a very well expressed piece.. and shows how much some may not know what goes on behind the scenes.. Thanks for sharing, and all the best within this contest!
Peace, Timothy
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thanks. your comment is very much appreciated.
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this is a very good write. very deep and full of pain. thanks for sharing this and best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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thanks so much. that's really nice of you to say.
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