You made me believe you
That you loved me
But then you tore me down
I thought I knew you
But I never did, did I?
You just showed me your mask.
I couldn't delve
Cause you'd yell so loud,
It'd hurt my heart to speak
My mind to you
My soul going blue
Then you lost.
You lost me
You lost my love
You lost the best thing in your life.
But now you want me back
And I just can't resist
I love you still
And always will
No matter what I do
I know you're bad for me
But you'll always be
The best thing in my life.
A contest entry
- I want... by TeenageTears.
450 points, ended December 3, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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(Mum's comment)
Wow sounds like my marriage! lol. I so do know where you are coming from, brilliant writing. -
this is good, a pleasure to read.
thank you for entering & good luck
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