Way too much to do yet
My desk is piled high
Work I have to do right here
Can't do it in the sky
So if you're lookin' for me
I'm telling you right now
I will not heed your callin'
No Way - My Lord - No How
Mr. Doug
A contest entry
- Tell Me a Story (A PIF Contest) by malkinpuss.
1050 points, ended December 3, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest for over age of 50 by misticmoonlite.
675 points, ended March 22, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Keep listening to the call just don't tell him when you're going to turn up. He will wait.
Jim -
Amen
WELL put and well told to the Listening God above, he does listen, believe me,I am proof of that! you kick butt to stay here with us!
THANK YOU FOR this entry
MM -
That's telling Him, you still sound a little undecided though - Not!
A piece written for fun but with a definite message - You ain't ready! lol.
Von
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Well done!
Thanks for entering my contest. Great play on words...quite witty really. i was looking for more of a tale/story but appreciate the talent evident here!
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Lol,Way to go, I must have said that a year ago, I love this story, you keep telling us all that,The Good Lord does listen, I know that for a fact, I am still here, I want you in this world to share your life stories, thank you for a very nice wake up story...lol...MM
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G'Day Mr Doug
♥
Reading this I was thinking "Ok, his social and has a fun life? The point?"
Then I hit the last stanza and was blown away with it !
Brings it all together and delivers a swift kick.
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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