I've tried to let go,
I've tried to fight this,
but it's endless... useless...
After all the years separated,
you still search for me,
you still linger in my doorway,
way untouched...
I still light a candle, making sure you won't come back anymore...
I want you... but I have to let you go...
I'm sorry... you wounded me very deep... you stole the most important thing
to me...
I've tried to make myself understand,
that you were never around to help me up,
that I was just your mere servant, your mere, client,
your other in list.
I've tried to tell myself,
that after everything I've done and seen,
I was always left alone, and empty.
I've tried to let myself know,
that somethings time cannot erase,
time cannot prevent, time cannot errupt.
And yes, you've haunted my mind and dreams,
you've stolen my sanity, you've made me believe in you...
when you were never here...
you captivated me... tortured me sweetly... loved me completely...
then let go....
Though you won't be here anymore,
you'd still be lingering... hovering... being...
you shall remain in me... forever..
even though you took everything of me....
{ My Immortal }
Author notes
"love is evil,
it's blind and cruel and unwise.
Some believes it makes you die."- By me, from my poem What Am I Now?
option#9: love
option #2: song: My Immortal by: Evanescence
age:15
A contest entry
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Comments
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loved thsi poem... you write so wonderful yet my heart hurts when i read for the pain you express.. im sorry you have to know pain.. if i could take pain from everyone i would... hugs....
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Amazing
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wow. and my friends say my poems are deep for my age. this poem makes me lost for words. its inspiring, breathtaking and undoubtedly exquisite. it makes me wish for tears to come to my eyes. thank you very much for entering this and the best of luck.
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I loved this poem! It was great! I could feel the love and anger between both characters in this write! Great imagery! Love is greatly explained in this poem. Good luck in my contest!
-Summer Moonstone -
I take it you like evanescence!! awsome hehe this is a wonderfull write it really caught my eye!! Keep Writing!!
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this is pretty good. Love really does suck... I don't know why I bother being in love... but then I talk to Cory and it just... I don't know... I really miss him and wish his mom would move back down here! She knows that Chris isn't good for her, but she just... she odn't want to open her eyes... and... just... I don't know... yeah, I dont know where I'm going with this... so yeah, I'll just wrap it up here... ha. good luck in both contests! keep up your great work!
Crimson -
Yes love can really feel like it's something so evil. I wonder how people can often talk about it so happily and how it makes the world go around when all it has given me is pain. It's stopped some people's worlds...
Great write and thanks for adding it.
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