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Silent Answers

Time races through my mind
events work their way around
what is the real meaning of life?
I ask this but no one makes a sound

Is there really a heaven?
or do we all vanish to nothing
Is there really a hell?
I really wish someone would say something

Everyones mouth is sealed shut
but they still manage to hate
why do they have to say everything bad?
why do they have to discriminate?

No one knows anything
and everyone sits in silence
all I have is questions with no answers
I really dont buy it

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Written October 21st, 2003

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  • poetryality silver member
    December 4, 2004
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    There is a heaven!
    There is a hell!
    We'll all see
    in the end.

    But for now
    unanswered questions
    puzzle all my kin.

    But if you look deep within
    all mysteries erupt.
    Until then we must sip
    from this life's bitter cup.

    Don't worry my love, we all go through these times, even when we've become old and gray haired like me! Don't think too hard it does make one weary!

    Be Blessed,
    Renee

  • mikaela
    November 6, 2003
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    this is not my subject but i really liked this one its great and the questions you have many people including me have them buet again no one says anything

  • FromTheAshes
    October 25, 2003
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    nice flow, i like the point you made in this one, i agree, great write


  • Beauty Sleeps
    October 22, 2003
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    It seems like I keep missing you while you're online.... Oh well, I've been busy lately...
    It's a good write... Very nice, good flow and nice thought put into it. Keep it up!
    Kate