Turn down the lights while I give you my best.
Let me beat that ass good baby and put you under arrest.
Champagne and roses, oh my, can I have a sip.
Now bend over slut and taste the sting of this whip.
It's nine inches long with the power of Zeus.
Spread those wings baby so we can get loose.
Let me cum into your palace of lust and desire.
To extinquish the flames of your raging fire.
Here comes the thunder with pleasure and pain.
I want to make you scream like you're fucking insane.
I'll make that pussy drip like purple rain.
As I rock your ass with this sweet candycane.
Author notes
Picture #3
A contest entry
- Naughty Adults only. by Riftkin.
475 points, ended November 20, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love this thank you for your entry. be safe and have fun
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Someone's got a naughty secret.
Thank you for sharing. Now I find, I'll have to go put my panties directly in the dryer.
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WOW THIS WAS REALLY GOOD MAKE IT RAIN LIKE PURPLE RAIN HUH! LOL
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what wonderful metaphors you used to show just how naughty you can really be....Short but it spoke volumes....like a mini novel of erotica.....novy
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Very Good
You made me blush . . . its been so long since ive blushed by reading any poetry !!!! This as short but right in the spot poem. I wish i was her, being whipped till i can't hold it no more!!!
Luv ya, lots of hugs and kisses
GND
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If I read this to my bf, he'd rip my clothes off
This is amazing- no other word for it. I'm extremely jeleous.
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HOTTTTTTTT
this is way outta control...and I LOVE IT 
You did an amazing job on this...I wonder...
nevermind
ephiphany
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