It's all pretend
Nothings real about her
She smiles
When she's hurt
She cries
when she's happy
She'll say she understands
When she doesn't have a clue
She says she's your bff
But she's flirting with your boyfriend
She says she cares
But she couldn't care less
She'll say you can trust her
Then she'll tell everybody your secret
She can lie to your face
Without even flinching
She says the exact opposite
Of what she means
She makes you think she's the oposite
Of who she really is
She makes you jelous of everything she has
When in reality
She has nothing
She seems perfect
But the truth she's not
Inside
She's dieing
Author notes
Just about every girl will or has met this girl. I know I've met over five. 'Was' friends with two of them.
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I'm so sorry you've been through this, I can't count the times I have.
Fantastic write, I love the dedication, I know its very relateable to many people.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
wow i love it! i can relate
I will comment once the contest is nearly finished
best of luck
plx comment me
-midgetbridgey -
Beautiful but the lament is strong - your words, emotional and personal can be very effective in relativity.
Thanks for entering,
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i am doing a really thourugh review. Just causde im yur frind doesnt mean i wont be hard on you! Now, you spelled DYING wring in thew last line other that that, its good
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This is good, I've learnt to stay away from those girls, I can now tell them from a mile away, if a girl seems a bit like she thinks shes better than everyone else, I just stay away from them... 'Cause girls like that are awful...
A very well written poem, I'm sure there's a lot of pain behind these words...
Well done, thanks for entering and good luck! =) -
oh my gosh you have no idea! my school is full of them! i finally gave up on trying to find friends that are girls....i have all guy friends...and i dont miss having freinds that are girls...now if i can find a girl that wont backstabb me then hey im ready to see one but i aint seen one yet! but half the guys at my school dont even look in their direction! and im tired of them thinking they are better than everyone else when really they just think that and no one else does its just in there heads!
any ways great poem! i loved it haha you can probably tell but i will be checking into more of your poems! plz keep writing
*peaceout*
amber
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