The Goddess of the dungeon
with your temptations of lustful desire
Longing to penetrate your soul
with this sexual ecstasy
Tempested to caress you nightly
tormented with damnation
Imagining the taste of your flesh
upon our burning carnage
Our cum is set free
with the excitement of your hard nipples
As your pussy pounds
releasing a warm flow of wetness
Moaning with the craving of
our hard cocks deep inside you
A long awaiting torment
for that sexual pleasure
Starving for our tongues to
caress your body
As our lips absorb
your sweet cum within
A contest entry
- Naughty Adults only. by Riftkin.
475 points, ended November 20, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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To Return a Favor
Okay. I'm laughing, I have to admit! I am -not- the type of person to review an adult oriented poem, but this what was predetermined by fate, so I'm going to try my best ^.^
If I'm correct, you wrote this poem to an image posted at the top, no? I enjoy how you use the first person plural for the demon, gives it a legion kind of feel, and to me it sounds more evil than simply using 'my' and 'mine'.
I'm going to have to place my vote for the second verse to be the best, as it did not invoke a laugh from me like some of the others did and gave the poem that sinister feel that the image tries to lay on you.
I'm going to have to say that the poem is good, but again, I am not the best judge of this type of poem, and I appologize for that! -
love this thank you for your entry. be safe and have fun
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HOT!
Now that was hot! You described this picture perfectly. Great work.
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the picture you used is number 2. one is the one at the top of the page
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