the words -y-o-u-
were barren memoirs
an etching of a kiss
inside the arch
of constellations,
as teary stars
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward 20...Patience I will judge this sunday 9th promise by Malabu.
450 points, ended December 9, 2007, 24 entries
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Criticism Is Very Much Welcomed -- I Am Here To Learn
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I liked this..but felt the last line would have put the finishing touch such as stars fall...I like where you went with this too...leave thoughts flowing....thanks for your entry
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Wow
Sad indeed...got the prompt all worked up here...Veyr well written..All the best!
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