Lying down I want to feel his skin,
Trusting the radiant heat from his powerful bod,
Placing any but all make-shift pillow creasing the bounds of my cunt,
Play folds as my nails reach his and draw blood to the surface,
Biting down hard as the moans starts to wail
Pleasure to Pain as Pain deepens my arousal...
Bare deep,
Drifts the weight of my tongue,
Every inch burns of my caress, my silhouette
Target my desire plain,
For passion's bliss shall bury my my need for your approval,
Kindred flame of spirit known
Our hearts to beat as one,
To die inside and feel you move
To shed my skin you feel my soul,
To satisfy our mutual need for hunger...
We'll dine in light in candle flicker
We'll feast upon ourselves,
Taking what there is to offer
A night, A bed, and A purse
Drag me to submission
I want to be subdued,
Giving of myself, taking all of you
Tackle my emotions
Ripping of my clothes
Jerking off your penis
Baring all my soul
Can you feel my spirit
Rising to my ends
I want you so' completely
To this I can't pretend
my mind for you is all things,
cause your my every one
I want to take you to my dungeon
And rape you just for fun
My whip will be your beating
Enjoy I'll kiss your wounds
If we be so' lucky to conceive within my womb?
My dire heart is beating
I want you for myself
Never once misleading
to trust in someone else
Heal me with your kisses
My bosom, and My breast
if we die tonight
it will be within your breathe...
Author notes
out of wild roses she made a bed
A contest entry
- Get Yourself Heard! by PorSiempre.
380 points, ended December 5, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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I liked your use of metaphor to invoke emotion. This was a very original interpretation of the lyric and I found it very refreshing. Something that I was not expecting at all. Good job and good luck on the contest!

