Its so hopeless
I can never say never
when you talk to me
or kiss my cheek
Oh
I feel so weak
when you look at me
my walls come down
and now
you made me yours
Its so not fair
when I turn you away
and you come back
ten times more powerful
Oh boy
I can't stand how you make me feel
its like no other
sensations or satisfactions
but you boy
oh its all you
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11/18/07 12:48 pm
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Its so hopeless
I can never say never
when you talk to me
or kiss ME WHEREVER
Oh
I feel so weak
when you look at me
my walls come down
EVEN IF THE OUTLOOK IS BLEAK
Its so not fair
when I turn you DOWN
and you come back
ten times more powerful
Oh boy
I can't stand how you make me feel
its like no other
sensations or satisfactions
but you ARE ANOTHER
my changes are capitalized
oh its all you
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just wanted see why my Hemeoone Ann and my sis Rosemary are always hiding away the good stuff, but now Ive found out, keeping little gems to themselves..tut tut..
Beautiful words expressing how you feel around someone, well thought out write, and a pleasing ending. well done.
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Lorissa's Way!
Love it , Love it, Lobe it!,,Its' form and topic...is so cute dear niece,,These men, are a puzzle sometimes, but your one seems to be so supportive...I would hang on to him if I were you...Glad to see you blossoming in your writing...A girl with many gifts, my niece who forever delights me....A wonderful write!
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I love getting ur comments! It makes me happy
I love u Auntie
ty!!
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i like it.... is it lyrics? or am i just seeing things.... again?
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Kinda like lyrics, idk
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