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Hermit Hills

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My blissful home in Hermit Hills
Where no one calls to give me ills,
I live up high, up in the clouds
And play my music way out loud!

The moon kissed beams they dance about,
I join with them til I wear out
The music blares I sing along
Until the rays of moon be gone.

My way of life just might seem weird,
But no complaints are ever heard
I live alone that suits me fine
I never have to hear one whine.

If I get bored with the great view
I simply go to tower two
I love my life, it is just right
Especially on the moonlit nights.
















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Picture provide by Pollycheck: 'Strange High House' From Webshots In album: Miscellaneous Artists

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  • ronnica
    January 12, 2008

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    "OK Mr Trump. tower two guests are waiting."
    this seems a grand existence,fantasy even.
    "Until the rays if moon be gone"
    and one is swanning all alone.
    It made me think.


  • Pollycheck
    December 1, 2007
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    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. This is a very interesting take on the picture prompt. This sounds like a person that loves to live with nature and not be bothered by the intrusions of the outside world. I too, at times wish for such solitude.