Purple mists
harbor, the me
I don’t understand.
Highlighting my shell.
Only visable to the open minded,
or spiritually inclined.
Fuscia fantasies, swirl.
Dancing with inherited
violet shadows.
Orbiting shards
of frozen tears, shimmer
with gradually gathered wisdom.
Currents changing
as I step forward,
or digress.
Layers of then,
woven together with
now, and forever.
Traveling by night.
a reincarnated essence,
gathering de ja vu.
Spiritual internventions,
warning the conscious
through premonition.
Divinity guides,
whether or not I follow,
the choice is mine.
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Author notes
Yo~ delightfulmess here.
A contest entry
- Pre-Writes from my Faves!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
675 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is amazin and im sure youl become a novelist, your kids should be very proud to have a mother who can write so well !!
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A hopeful piece of finding the balance, searching dreams which shield innocence and beauty. Nice imagery and thought woven within. Well penned. Thank you for your entry!
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"layers of then woven together with now and forever"-love that...great purple imagery abound here carefully crafted, your so creative...a great piece.
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Wow~~
Okies this is one that grabs at Spirit
Magnificent images but also get a sense of longing...like a Dreamer sitting on the crescent Moon...looking at the stars
Love this!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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great imagery and wonderful write
good luck in the contest
stephanie -
Excellent
Wonderful creation for the contest. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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So pleased to see a trophy on this piece. Congratulations on a job well done! ~Pamela
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wonderful wonderful wonderful... I love the way you've incorporated all of the elements from the picture, even those fine details that the observer may not first notice, and you interpret the colors, the events, and the emotions that the image evokes...
Grand!
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This is good dear. Good luck but this is really beautiful love it!
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"Orbiting shards
of frozen tears, shimmer
with gradually gathered wisdom. "
OH I just fell in love with this stanza. VERY good to the prompt. Excellent piece. Well done. ~Pamela
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Wow
Look at what you write in my absence. Sheer beauty. Well written, good luck.
Your bestest buddy, Buddy
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will beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee back
-sigh-
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Love the pic waiting for the poem!! LOL
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