"Feel their breath upon your neck
It smells of blood, it smells of death
You wince before the their teeth pierce your awaiting flesh
You keep your eyes closed, just waiting for the pain"
You can feel the night darken
And your prey closing in
You hear a fierce snap and feel waves of pain
As it's cold, sharp teeth penetrate your skin
You struggle and crie
"Let me go, let me be!"
Your eyes whirl in your sockets
Only blurry darkness you see
You feel a little faint
Then a little strong
For a while you feel powerful
Like nothing has gone wrong
Your skin has turned a ghastly grey
Your nail's are dead black
Your eyes are blood red
Now there's no going back
Your prey gives a cackle of approval
And flies off into the night
For it's foe is now it's friend
It has won the fight
Author notes
Spongebob and Patrick
A contest entry
- `Finish This Poem` - ~Vampires~ by BeautifulNitemare.
300 points, ended December 10, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.
Comments
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the last stanza has a grammatical error and i see one spelling mistake, but other than great! "For it's foe is now it's friend" gr8!
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