You talk of helping,
Of good will.
You talk of making peace,
A miracle pill.
You say you fight and that you strive,
When merely living keeps the blood alive.
You claim you can help and that you can teach,
HELP! Mr Prime Minister, Practise what you preach.
We're not dumb,
We can see past your cries.
We can see their bloated bellies,
And hear their hungry cries.
We can hear the war,
See the guns and tanks.
AND YOU ACT SO PROUD,
EXPECTING PRAISE AND THANKS??
On your "democracy,"
Your government I'll pass.
And as far as my vote,
Mr Prime Minister,
YOU CAN KISS MY ASS!!
A contest entry
- increase the peace [or something along those lines] by Sofia Nadia.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2007, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this poem makes me feel "Political".....what about you??
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Powerful political piece. Congrats on the HM.
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lmao.
ohhh this so made my day. verrryyy slam and i love it, the honesty, the sarcasm...god, it's just so raw. it's a fond idea and thought i'm typically not a fan of the whole AB CD rhyme scheme, it still works somehow. great finish too. thanks for entering and good luck!
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Thanks!!
Thanks heaps for you comment!!
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where did my comment go??
hhmm...
Well I said;
AAhhh address it to my president to! -
ahhh address it to my president too!
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Ahhh
Lol thanks
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it is upposed to read "see past your lies"...sorry
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