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ramble

you think I do things
because I care what others think
but then I wonder
do you even know the base structures of me?
let alone the fibers of my being?

do you even know me?

It breaks my heart
and angers me
that you would think I actually care
what others think.....

and the crowd didn't help either....

thanks for yelling at me...
because it's not like I can get that at home.

any comments appreciated.

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  • ultimate beluga
    March 14, 2008

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    thats very eloquent and poetic emotion purging... this is very simple but its beautiful in its simplicity. and has real atmosphere... great work


  • Dancing Marionette
    November 22, 2007
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    im sorry for yelling at you :/


  • Jarrod silver member
    November 18, 2007
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    its good to let things out sometimes