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Walking on your Sun Ray

The Sun Jackie...
separated darkness to hope
taking away every last shadow of doubt
that had drawn you away
each sun ray enraptured you
to capture your imagination
and let you walk on sunrays
far beyond the great barrier reef
To glisten you're heart
Like the sun dancing
On every ripple on the ocean
Reflecting joy straight to you
And you're journey
Far away that beckons you
As you seem to walk on air
over dolphins calling out to you
And day dreams
you can feel with you're finger tips
and starshine
that turns you're dreams
into esoterical moon rays
And you're heart
Once again
becomes that deep blue wonder
that I would love to fall into
and dround to the depths
that you're sun rays
would draw me into
and join you
On you're journey
On every sunray
that you need to explore......

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  • Uglyblackdog
    November 18, 2007
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    Lets go!!!

    Ohh so sweet Jackie..Thankyou for your comments...I got your hand lets go!!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    Aww... so lovely!!! I'm so glad my lil poem inspired your even greater one!! I absolutely loved this!!

    Take my hand... we are both on a journey!!
    xx