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[ She silently reads ]

She silently reads
Not paying attention
Her mind,
Stuck on that man
Who caused all her dreams
To hit the fan
A crimson splatter
The same color as his eyes
Poor little dame
Her heart's a tatter
She dreams of his smile
Face alight with disaster
Marry me Mary
He took her hand
Slightly left
A generous kiss
She flushes scarlet
And waves her hand
The picture of innocence
They almost believed her lie
A world so perfect
Turned into hell
A smile so sweet
Damned and deplete
"You didn't love me,
Now you won't love again"
She stabbed her prince charming
No one could defend
Heart, head, and smile
His life now at end

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Wrote it with Gabi

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  • storiesuntold
    February 29, 2008
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    Oh my goodness

    Oh how such a sweet thing can change in a blink of an eye yet the men still persist on their folly


  • storiesuntold
    November 22, 2007

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    Very good write

    Yes as a young woman her heart so innocent that she hears only truth from lips of deceit . Sad indeed that the young men in this country are never taught how a woman should be treated and in not learning they use those girls like toys then throw them aside for the pain of love she now feels was never there in his heart so he never feels the pain .