I relive the scene through tearful eyes
and sorow is unchained again.
I knew the truth, you denied.
Our trust had been broken
yet still you replied
by telling me
a n o t h e r
boldfaced
L I E
Author notes
A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. It can be on any subject and
rhyming is optional.
Please tell me what you think
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Is there any form that you cant master or haven't tried? Seems like you do each so well, Marcia, adain I guess, getting repeteteive it seems saying that but true. Another nice work of yet another form. Thank you for sharing your talents will all of us,
Evan
kust looking below seems as if Im not the only one who has taken note of the different forms thing
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One of the characteristics of being and Adult Child of an Alcholic. You will lie when it would be just as easy to tell the truth. Some people don't feel their truth is worth having.
Your poem is a good work within the form.
Love, Tom B.
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Where you gett off showing in front of folks like this, !!!! Showoff, just kidding, I must say you are impressive with the different formsof poetry you have shown these past weeks. I'm a good poet but I hardly ever sit and try to wrote in any form< maybe I should try it, and again you Showoff...........joe
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This is great! The image that tells a story, the syllable count and you even composed a subtle rhyme. You definatly have the gift.
Love,
Amera♥
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Wow! You are good. Enjoyed the read, All of us lie once in awile but some people ae chronic liars. This poem reflects it.
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Beautiful job you have done here... You are certainly progressing here in your poetry. Keep up the incredible work!!
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Love this one! Why do liars tell lies to get out of their lies?
You're getting really good with your forms!
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