Among the pieces of jagged crystal I sit,
Trembling.
Could this be the start of my breakdown?
Undoubtedly.
Beautiful colors pour out of me with ease.
Red.
I can see my future in the many glistening shapes.
Promising.
There is hope in this puddle of premonition and blood,
Or am I only among shards of glass?
A contest entry
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Nice! Thanks for entering!
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Oh wow! This is very deep. I loved it from start to finish and I really enjoyed reading this, I really connected to it. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful expressions....
Lovely write...
Many blessings
~A~
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Awwww, I can actually relate to what this poem is saying
Very well done on expressing yourself 
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The self premonitioning really shows off well the strong caliber everyone goes through in their life of daily struggles. Keep penning
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I love the imagery and the question posed to the reader at the end... this piece inspires reflection, introspection... well written... I especially like the one word lines interspersed within the piece...
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wow... I like the prospective that you gave here... its different... I also love how you would give a line then a word.... cool format. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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wat a vivid picture u have made here. keep it up.
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Thanks
Thanks! Life is full of illusions don't you think?? Glad you enjoyed.
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