listen to the echo
of heartstrings,
played on violas
within a flower bud.
the music opens slowly-
petal by petal, casting
dandelion melodies
upon the evening wind.
Author notes
27 words.
A contest entry
- brevity by Melissa Gayle.
5500 points, ended November 25, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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i don't care for the 'of' on its own line -
aside, love the images in here. -
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You know, I agree...I'm not sure why I structured it that way originally. Thanks for the comment and the honorable mention.
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Very beautiful imagery.
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