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Love Is.....

Love is a feeling
an emotion of something you feel
deep inside your whole being
something quite indescribable

 

It makes you weak in the knees

makes your head spin

you feel butterflies in your stomach

along with a racy pulse

 

Love is..... 

selflessness

all you long to do is exist

for this beautiful feeling

 

Love is not something you can put into words

it's an emotion of one's thoughts and feelings

something that comes from deep within

a connection you feel from one's heart strings to another

 

Love is.....

True...you live, breathe and feel

just for this other being who

you know has this connection to your heart

 

Love is something your heart tells you to do

it comes naturally and you CANNOT stop it

you CANNOT control it

Love just happens 

 

 

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word prompt: True love
great prompt!
My feelings on love

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  • Candy6
    November 21, 2007
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    Great love poem.


  • sunflowers21573
    November 18, 2007
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    wow, you got gold and boy does it show why. Beautifully done


  • Knight70
    November 17, 2007

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    A testament to true love...

    Love is something your heart tells you to do

    it comes naturally and you CANNOT stop it

    you CANNOT control it

    Love just happens



    I couldn't agree more. These are such beautiful words. Very well done on the prompt!! Thank you for sharing this with me. Knight70


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 17, 2007

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    This is really beautiful.
    And I agree with this
    ove is something your heart tells you to do

    it comes naturally and you CANNOT stop it

    you CANNOT control it

    Love just happens

    We can not control it no matter what. Great take of the prompt and good luck


  • Think2wice
    November 17, 2007

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    Oooo I definitely agree with you that love is beyond our control. You don't find it - it finds you, and then it takes you away. Sometimes love ends up hurting, and sometimes it gives our lives meaning. Love is something that should come so naturally that you just want everything for this person you are willing to sacrifice. This poem was absolutely wonderful and gave me such a warm feeling inside. Thank you for sharing this with me, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!


  • Arizona Sunset
    November 17, 2007

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    very lovely poem excellent poem about love. Love sometimes does just happen when you expect it least of all! Thank you for sharing, best to you in contest! love this! ~blessings always~


  • TwilightDazzles
    November 17, 2007

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    This is beautiful!!!! Seany is right...the last stanza is astounding. Especially the last line...that one line says so much about love. I wish you the best in the contest


  • Stickboy
    November 17, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful Love is something your heart tells you to do

    it comes naturally and you CANNOT stop it

    you CANNOT control it

    Love just happens

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