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Unrequited Love

unrequited love
is like a wound unhealed--

a return touches
with unbearable pain,

while continued absence
leaves a silent scar.

both of these
last eternally.

16 nov, 2007

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  • fathom me
    November 28, 2007

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    I guess Mari's right (as always) ..sending you some love


  • adsaige
    November 18, 2007
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    Judged

    Short and intense--masterfully told in your verses. I love it. This is definitely capturing a sense of something I was looking for.Welcome to the finalist list and good luck in the contest.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    Unfortunately that is very true. There is no half way to that feeling, and what hurts most is that we don't really ask for it, just happens...


  • MargaretG
    November 18, 2007

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    Things are the way we see them, and I have felt this way; your expression is excellent. Now I have a different perspective and metaphor: unrequited love is a closed door, which opens on a brick wall.
    Life goes on. Best of luck with this!