Alone, torn, confused, angry
She lies there
Emotions threatening to overwhelm her
Sinking into a better place,
a safer place
Hidden,
She sinks into apathy
Oblivion
The next days
aren’t days
Everything is a blur
Everything is pointless
Everything is him
He is everything,
all that matters
Everything
is now
nothing
Author notes
"I always needed time on my own, I never thought I'd need you there when I'd cry. And the days feel like years when I'm alone, and the bed where you lie is made up on your side. When you walk away, I count the steps that you take. Do you see how much I need you right now?"- "When You're Gone", Avril Lavigne
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Comments
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Good write. I like this a lot. Really portrays the feeling of loss that the song portrays. Well written, the lack of general grammar is obviously done on purpose, not due to lack of ability. Good luck.
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