i see specs of stardust in your eyes
sparkling throughout the starry night skies
shimmering and twirling for all to see
a dance of the heavens, meant for only me
i feel your touch upon my skin
explosions arise from deep within
love and lust encased as one
may all my pain become undone
i feel your lips pressed to mine
all planetary bodies in my heart align
little drops of heaven fall from your eyes
i knew that you loved me, that day that you cried
i see you heart entwined mine
all that was dark now shines
with every beat my dying heart makes
is purely and only, just for your sake
i see the love, the care you feel
and i know that finally this is real
a touch, a love, a world unknown
and all the happiness of life is shown
you gave me back all i lost
blessed me with your love
the best gift sent to me from above
we shall never be apart
i chose to be here with you
i chose to finally know what i want to do
i chose to be forever in your embrace
my fist choice of many, is to enter love's grace
A contest entry
- Saturday Quickiness 10/at least 10 L/1 hr by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 17, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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AP bestfriend,
im sorry i have not been able to comment as much as i should. i have been so busy!
this poem is stunning, and i wish you luck in the contest!
you are very talented!! -
lovely words of first choice. success in the contest.
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lovely rhyme and touching emotion!
TY for entering
Lynda
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