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Wind Upon

The wind pushes against his soul
I want to rest inside to feel its tenderness

because he won’t let me have a chance
to rest my palm upon his heart

I want to be the breeze he feels
to be within for once
"soft wind of feelings"

Yes, for once to be within his heart...








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  • individuality gold member
    August 20

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    Well said and beautifully penned...
    Our mortal condition applies itself against Heaven's righteousness and we always feel the exquisite pain of falling short. We do offer peace and should do that, for 'tis high to be a judge. A deeply thought poem and as always, you say it so well.


  • fangs to blame
    April 6
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    I like this. Somewhat mysterious and dark. Brilliant write.

  • Liquid memories
    November 19, 2007

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    soft words that caress the soul and enters the heart. sweet ones! ALL THE BEST IN THE CONTEST.


  • opaqueangel
    November 18, 2007
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    this is not a rewards poem. fix in 24 hours. questions? message me!


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 18, 2007

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    A beautiful poem written here...
    I love this, but darling, the
    contest is for male poets only...
    Love, Lane


  • Angelic Princess21
    November 17, 2007
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    this is very beautiful. thank you for entering and best of luck

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