Rover a great loving dog
He was beautiful as can be
But one day he was so very sad
One of his eyes couldn't see
I took him to the vet
Rover one eye was big and red
I really thought she would help
His eye has to be remove she said
Oh my what a day
I don't know what to say
People think he should be sent away
But I want him to stay
I love my dog very much
No one understand why
But he is mine
Though he looks very shy
I want to keep my dog
We can still run and play
I hope he gets better
Maybe with a miracle someday
A contest entry
- Options Lovers Only! by Dancing the Rumba.
450 points, ended November 18, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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that is adorable.
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Very nice! But please put the rubberducky thing in your AN. Make sure to put which option you chose, too! Work on the grammar, and this poem could be PERFECT! I really do like it,
Vivien -
I hope Rover gets better soon too Maria. He'll be in my prayers. A fine poem to him. Thanks for sharing.
Brian
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